Beating My Drum
With a Little Help from my Friends
I’m happy to say that Nasra Al Adawi at Living in Poetry has just posted an interview about my poetry as well as my upcoming prose book Original Faith: Becoming Our Truer Nature. Just prior to this, Victoria Bresee of The Polished Mirror happened to look over my site and complete the contact form to be notified when Original Faith is available so she can review it. Wouldn’t you know: by week's end, editors at The Atlantic and The New Yorker had also contacted me but I had to beg off, saying I had too many prior commitments.
Kidding aside, I’ve known both Nasra and Victoria for most of my “blogging life” – about two years – and have developed a very positive sense of each of them as persons. Major focuses in Nasra’s life and blogging are poetry; health issues and related charity work; and women’s issues. Victoria comes from a contemplative Christian orientation with major interests in social justice and women’s issues.
Thanks to each of you! And since poetry is such a major theme in Nasra’s writing and blogging, I thought I’d do a poem today. Guess it might as well be about me (but really it's about everyone) since I seem to be blowing my own horn here or at least beating my own drums:
Cutting Time
The shuddering roll vibrated in my fingers
Almost like a living thing; like bird’s wings struggling
To roil the air in nearly creamy swirls of sound. Into that near-liquid,
Flapping like mad, my rim shots splashed their slick remarks:
Off-handed cleverness surmounting rudiments
That tightened and loosened, gathered and released, into
Sudden tom-tom momentary rumba sounds.
And my two young arms dropped to the floor tom,
A swift triplet ending it on a bass kick. Then smash it,
Crash it, thrashing the flashing gold
Of every cymbal flaring its fascinating dish
Of overlapping reverberations like a chorus of monks
Sustaining fading Ohms, underpinned by the
Thick and solid thud of the bass drum that suddenly
Ripped forward on a low fly, my right ankle
Finding the full speed of my green adrenaline
Like a horse’s hooves greet earth,
Peppering the dance floor four to a swift measure:
All the while my hands flicking off hard pieces of silver sound
Under the colored lights,
Intimate with the dancing of strangers,
As I deftly cut and marked off slivers from our time;
Like nicks in any pair of splintering sticks
That I once held trembling like bird wings in my hands.
Paul Martin
I’m happy to say that Nasra Al Adawi at Living in Poetry has just posted an interview about my poetry as well as my upcoming prose book Original Faith: Becoming Our Truer Nature. Just prior to this, Victoria Bresee of The Polished Mirror happened to look over my site and complete the contact form to be notified when Original Faith is available so she can review it. Wouldn’t you know: by week's end, editors at The Atlantic and The New Yorker had also contacted me but I had to beg off, saying I had too many prior commitments.
Kidding aside, I’ve known both Nasra and Victoria for most of my “blogging life” – about two years – and have developed a very positive sense of each of them as persons. Major focuses in Nasra’s life and blogging are poetry; health issues and related charity work; and women’s issues. Victoria comes from a contemplative Christian orientation with major interests in social justice and women’s issues.
Thanks to each of you! And since poetry is such a major theme in Nasra’s writing and blogging, I thought I’d do a poem today. Guess it might as well be about me (but really it's about everyone) since I seem to be blowing my own horn here or at least beating my own drums:
Cutting Time
The shuddering roll vibrated in my fingers
Almost like a living thing; like bird’s wings struggling
To roil the air in nearly creamy swirls of sound. Into that near-liquid,
Flapping like mad, my rim shots splashed their slick remarks:
Off-handed cleverness surmounting rudiments
That tightened and loosened, gathered and released, into
Sudden tom-tom momentary rumba sounds.
And my two young arms dropped to the floor tom,
A swift triplet ending it on a bass kick. Then smash it,
Crash it, thrashing the flashing gold
Of every cymbal flaring its fascinating dish
Of overlapping reverberations like a chorus of monks
Sustaining fading Ohms, underpinned by the
Thick and solid thud of the bass drum that suddenly
Ripped forward on a low fly, my right ankle
Finding the full speed of my green adrenaline
Like a horse’s hooves greet earth,
Peppering the dance floor four to a swift measure:
All the while my hands flicking off hard pieces of silver sound
Under the colored lights,
Intimate with the dancing of strangers,
As I deftly cut and marked off slivers from our time;
Like nicks in any pair of splintering sticks
That I once held trembling like bird wings in my hands.
Paul Martin







26 Comments:
You have picked what I believe to be the most difficult subject--music--to portray in words (I have tried and found it so frustrating!)
You have so many wonderful images and metaphors packed into every line--that can be lingered on, savored--
I especially enjoyed the lines "My hands flicking off hard pieces of silver sound/Under the colored lights/Intimate with the dancing of strangers"...we can really see and feel the moment--
The hard part of writing about music is that we read and understand words so slowly, compared to the immediate experience of music...but, after all, we are re-living your memory as we read this poem--in the infinite time and rhythm of your own mind!
Are we to understand that you were a drummer in a band--or is this a creation of your imagination?
What a truly beautifully thought-out poem this is. Feels like lightning movement in imagery! :-)
I read your bio; we lived in western Mass. for many years, about 10 in the town Reinhold Niehbur had a summer house and where he supposedly wrote the Serenity Prayer.
I am going to have to do a little research on the chives thing, but will have to add you to my blog-list so I can check you out more!
"...my right ankle/
Finding the full speed of my green adrenaline/
Like a horse’s hooves greet earth..."
thanks for coming and checking out my artwork--I know I didn't add much to the debate earlier--what I really should have said is that "Christ's message is so clearly about love and inclusion, therefore I feel..."
especially since I've had kids, I realize that Love is the big thing--and we are all loved--God doesn't need to be petty and exclusive...
Thanks again for coming by--
I think the day I publish, AND somebody else talks about me, I'll beat the heck out my drum, too.
.. Thick and solid thud of the bass drum that suddenly
Ripped forward on a low fly, my right ankle
Finding the full speed of my green adrenaline
Like a horse’s hooves greet earth ..
Awesome writing, Paul. I could almost hear you hittin' 'em. The skins, I mean, of course. I could definitely see it as I read that and the last.
As I deftly cut and marked off slivers from our time;
namaste
FIREBIRD: Yes, into my mid twenties. I imagine it's easiest to write about something you've played, otherwise it would be hard to get enough of the detail?
SUSAN A: Happy that you liked it -
TUT-TUT: I didn't even know he wrote that. I had to read a lot of theology in divinity school and honestly, for me a lot of it seemed pretty boring and detached from experience. But Reinhold Niehbur was one of those I liked, also Paul Tillich.
SARAH: Thanks for looking around. The chives comes from when I was a kid, my dad had planted a small garden one year, maybe two, then let it go. But for years the chives kept coming!
KAREN: Those are some of the lines I like best too. One neat thing about playing drums, especially in the case of solos, is that the adrenaline, if you're somewhat nervous, actually enhances performance, translating into more speed and power. I guess that's what adrenaline's meant to do - be expressed in muscular activity. So with the drums, that works out well.
MAU: Hi, great to see you! I'll be dropping by -
MICHAEL B: You drummed too? Or you went through a period where you wanted to?
I guess I went through both. My parents didn't have a lot of money to throw around and wanted to be sure I was serious about it. So I started in grade five - just a drum pad. I didn't finally get the last piece in my kit till I was sixteen! It actually worked out pretty well, kind of forced me to develop the technical skill and speed before becoming distracted by having all those different surfaces to play.
JANICE T: Right and right. That is, I used to be able to drum. Today, with this severe a disability, I can no more drum than leave the Milky Way. So it's about good stuff and losing good stuff and writing the poem anyway.
PECOS BLUE: One thing my disablity has left untouched is my vital organs. I think my heart and lungs must sort of wonder why I'm not still jogging. Even after all this time I dream about it once in a while.
I may get to visit blogs a bit less frequently than I'd like, but that's just thanks to having more commentators than I expected, which I really appreciate.
Nasra
Hugs...Rosie
But I have to ask: what is it that makes you so mysteriously anonymous lately?
ROSIE: Really appreciate it and truly look forward to your response to it.
ENEMY OF THE R: Glad to have run into you in the blogosphere and I've been enjoying your visits.
MATTHEW?! Of the former swimming-in-the-water avatar? I'm glad she did that! If you're a diffent Matthew sorry about that, but I think that's you - I'll have to look in on your blog, thanks for stopping by.
Brilliant verse there!
TC
Keshi.
i'm glad you commented on my blog (though i think i have met with one of your former blog incarnations). i think you and nasra did a great job with the interview and the poem you have posted... i simply love it.
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